i liked this. very good.

Thanx ;)

Love it. You're one talented poet.

O M G....beautiful. one of the best ive ever read

Thank you for my comment (100 years ago...sorry) but, still wanted to thank you and tell you that I loved this...I can relate. Words are silenced only if society forgets to hear, so keep saying what you have to say, and keep listening. I like how you took a different approach to this...not stuck in a "typical emo" genre... Though I'm not a fan of free verse (mainly because I'm not great at it) I think you made it shine. Lovely work. Come see me again some time.
blessed be ..~*~..

I'm back one more time..I read this one again...I found myself thinking for a non-english-native he writes wonderfully. English is also my second language and I can really appreciate your facination with the language...what makes you great is that you are not stuck within the boundaries of english terminology, you acctually fashion your words to beauty..you don't use pre-stored phrases..I appreciate that. I relate. Wonderful job.
:) rose xox

That is really good you should write more