hmmm very true.

thanks!

dont know but some how this seems contrived i'll tell you soemthing how about you actually think about something and not someone...like the rain or the moon and brain storm. Practice

I am only satying this coz i read all your stuffand u seem to rite abt stuff that you think u strongly feel for but you dont.

if i dont make sense remember you dont need to heed me.

I don't understand you. Maybe you could explain differently? I really appreciate the feedback though. However, I do believe that I understand what I'm writing about, because I wrote it in a period where I felt terrible.

I like the way you first showed the positive and then the negative..... keep on the good work

really good poem zoe !!!! f u c k that bastard...he sure doesnt deserv YOU
Your eternal twitcher
E.