Our love

by Amanda   Oct 3, 2004


Our eyes met
and then we gazed
this was true love
not just a phase.

You lay your hand
upon me so
every move
allowing our relationship to grow

You look at me
with your gorgeous eyes
revealing secrets
and all you despise

Our souls intertwine
and we communicate
letting each other know
this was pure love divine

As we look into each other's eyes
we know what we feel
and we know our love for
another is completely real.

You caress me with your eyes
even this we truly realize

As we make our way
closer to one another
we think of us two
and no one other

The looks we're trading
are a little taunting
because both of us know
what we're wanting

Our eyes become dizzy
they are so dazed
we want it so bad
our lips become crazed

But the looks that were given
were soon yet retrieved
for our love so strong and pure
it couldn't be believed

Our lips begin to come together
as we stand outside in the cold dark weather.

Our lips touch
and give our eyes a rest
now our lips
are setup for a quest

Our love so strong and beautiful
it can't be defined
for this love we know best
is your love and mine.

By, Amanda

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    SORRY, I ACCIDENTLY PRESSED ENTER,
    But it was really really pretty and sad! The feelings you had for Beth really do seem real! But I have no say in this twisted love game! Your poem was wonderful you should write more! Good job,

    Sincerely, Amanda

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Thank you for the comment, as for the poem it was really, really pretty! AND