What happened

by Heather Clark   Oct 3, 2004


Through all this time
you had been my world.
So many situations
you've seen me through.
When times got rough
you never turned away.
What happened to us?
we use to be perfect
now it's all lost
and I'm left lonely,
I wonder if maybe i lost my only!

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  • 20 years ago

    by Kevin

    Not bad at all....it got a bit unbalanced in the middle there, i had no idea where the structure had went..but you pulled it back nicely at the end...short and sweet....

    I wish more people understood the less is more idea.

  • 20 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    nice and short. really sweet too! great poem. thanks for the comment, i appreciate it lots. take care:)

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    i used to think this all the time! great job!

  • 20 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Another cute poem...Hope ur feeling ok now....take care...FIVE>>>

  • 20 years ago

    by Liam

    nice poem. can relate to it so much, reminds me of how i still feel deep down. and i dont think that feeling will ever go away

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