An inspiration you are indeed girl! This poem was beautiful it explained the instensity and depth of love you feel to a T - a really excellent write babes you get better everytime!

Eirisa

Romantic and great, i must say. I will be reading more of yours. Keep up

thanks for commenting onh my poem... i also wanted to say though that i like allot of ur poems.. i have yet to read all of them but so far i like them.. it's funny cuz we have such similar writing styles.. i guess it just makes it easier to relate haha... ne ways great job

Very nice poem, Maybeth...full of love and emotion.

I'm just curious about Stanza 5:

With you I find
I’m always memorized
With you I find I’m
Always surprised

wondering if you really meant memorized...(that would work and is a cool concept) but it almost sounds like you were going for "mesmerized" that would complement "surprised" a little better.

Anyway, very great poem!