by Sean Allen Oct 4, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
A hollowed out man, |
by Natalie
W.O.W. |
by Megann Lee
Another well written poem. I thought the flow was good, adn you didn't lose me. I loved the third stanza though, it hust stood out the most to my eyes. |
I loved it i liked they flow and it was very deep ....5/5 |
It was very good there's nothing i could see wrong with it,just wish i could find out how to put my poems in a format like that,and thanks for your comments |
by Dorotea©
Once again, you've proven to me that you can write about anything and everything. Now that is one of the traits I really look for in a fellow poet and that I really admire. It shows that the writer is mature and willing to research any topic at hand, and then write a poem based on that. Awesome. |