Comments : Unrequited Love

  • 20 years ago

    by robyn

    wow sounds like you really like this guy... just approach him let him know how you feel, it might hurt but if he aint showin any signs of liking you back , honey you're young, move on cuz you are better than him

  • 17 years ago

    by StarLightxInHisEyes

    Wow, this really says what I feel for this one guy that is my best friend. Although, he's 26, and me being a meer 14, it may not work, but you have put it all into words. Thanks! Great job. you sound like you really ove this guy. If you love him as much as I love my guy, we're in the same boat. I just have to tell him that I love him so I don't loose him. I don' know if I have the guts too.
    Great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr Trio

    I like it
    I'm sorry, i found the ending to be a little mischievous and somewhat comical.
    But all in all, well written and it ran smoothly from one line to the next.
    Good job