wow, this poem is a really good poem and i think it is up there. I will be watching what other things you write.

This poem is one that makes you think about thinks and wonder exactly what you are doing with your life...makes you think your life is a little more precious then you originally thought and you don't have it so bad.

Thank you very much for the read.

Wow Amy!! I liked this poem A LOT!! You did a terrific job! I could see it all in my head... like a little movie or something. hehe. Anyway, terrific job! I love how you use your words and everything.

Amy

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Wow...another astonishing piece! I loved the darkness you conveyed! Very mysterious!! A very tragic tale!!!

Your poems can't be liked. They must be loved. Sad, tragic, great, terrific, fabalous. Your poems can't be described in one word either. You have a great talent for writing poems. Keep it up. :)

i loved this poem, u are truly a great writer! I love reading ur poems, they make u think a lot! Another great job!
Emily

What a life! This is a great poem, I can just imagine the pains and the heat in that room. There is a light in the outside I believe. Definately a 5/5