Poem is an interesting one. but i consider it more of a short story then anything. Perhaps a journal type entery. I am sorry if i am coming off as harsh. I don't know, i just don't get the "Poem" feel from it i guess.

The message was good like most are on this site, the heart was there and the willingness to put yourself out on the line by posting the poem. The messages of the poems you write are well thought out.

I am sorry for the pain you feel that you had to write this. " Perhaps I know why it is man alone who laughs: He alone suffers so deeply that he had to invent laughter." - Friedrich Nietzsche *a thought for you*