WOW! This is one of the most amazing poems Ive ever read. It was so sad but really well written. Im sorry for your loss. I can totally relate. Your definately talented. Ill be looking forward to your next poem. xoxo
-Amy

welcome to the site! whoa, that was long... capitalize God. i liked how you wrote it, starting with "i watched... she was" etc. it was certainly a good poem. keep it up! take care:)

p.s.
did you mean 'Depths'?

Wow... this poem was phenominal! Keep it up and take care! =)

~Grace

Hey thank you for commenting my poem, i really appriciate it, but all my poems put together couldn't even touch yours, That was soo awesome!

Wow... fantastic poem!!

Thank you all for your comments. I really appreciate it, as this is the first attempt at a poem and i am glad that you enjoyed reading it. I am glad that i didn't disappoint anyone. Thank you all for your concerns as well.

oh, i am writing under an alias i use a lot now, i am Shaun MK i prefer to keep my real name a secret, not like it matters now haha

Bear? i can't seem to find it if it is a spelling mistake *trust me i am no grammer expert or spelling great.* so if it is please could you be abit more specific.

amazing poems. you are truely talented. thanks so much for reading mine and commenting. it meant a lot. and i DID think abou thwat you said. I still want to die, but thanks. you did make me stop and think. if you ever want to talk my e-mail is alyssaangel67@verizon.net
and my AIM screan name is lyssxo928
alyssa

Such a heartbreaking poem, this one truly made me cry so i'm shocked, very suprised...I'm sure your grandmother looks down on you with such happiness...in bliss for all that you have done....you're a talented kind-hearted young man, what more could she ask for? and as for you believing she won't see you marry the woman you love, on bended knee, in a suit....hun, you better believe she will...right beside you throughout the days and nights, don't you ever forget that! shes in the greatest place she can be ... in that beautiful heart of yours....and i'll stop the rambling lol, wonderful poem!! God bless you

love Heather.

Hello again Darky !

i dont know whar to say ! but u left me speechless ! n u brought tears to my eyes! God ! i mean whatever i would say it wont be enough to express!

first am soo soorry for ur grandmother! I have lost a granfather that was an AngeL a friend a grandpa to me !!!

and let me tell you this,u said u want to see her oneday n repay her!! She is in ur heart ! u see her there in ur imaginations and U are REPAYING her now!! with these great writings with these great emotions u have ! am sure she is proud of you : )

Peace,
Darla

Oh..sorry for that long comment but its just coz i was affected by ur poem ! u did a great job n u deserve ur 5 : )

n tell you wut ! Smile ! : )

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see see ur smiling ..lol

Peace,
Darla

wonderful wonderful poem!
with the elments of the great description of her, the pain of loosing her, and the wording, when it was all tied together it ended up being one of the best poems i've read!
i really loved it! i was almost in tears by the end
i hope you'll be okay too!

~*LorienElf*~

wow this was really sad you nearly made me cry it was great thow and i'm sure your grandmother is smiling down on you. 5.

A sad and a well-written poem at the same time. Really makes us realize peoples worth after their departure. Its a good poem. Keep it up.

Kurt

another gr8 poem..i love it..kudos!

Hey..cool that You Featured this poem,its one of my fav poems of yours,

So Hello ,Lol
Hope you are Ok,i've been so Tied up too these days,i even didnt check up on my poems,but happily when i did today i saw your comments,so welcome back : )

and,yea you might not understand that poem,coz it speaks of things i faced in my life,anyway, i dont know how to explain it ...!

OK

See ya Later Darky mate ; )

Peace-and always peace-

That is really sad...I'm so sorry. It's good though that you seemed to have a pretty good relationship with her. I love this poem. I think its awesome that you wrote it about her. >3jess

your a really good writer because this is awesome too, i'm sorry about the lost of your grandma, sounds like a real tough time,

PLP ~lil slam~

i liked it....