I Love You

by UM   Oct 4, 2004


The way you smile,
The way you walk,
The cute little voice,
You use when we talk.

You’re my choice,
Yes it’s true.
I don’t think anyone,
Is as cute as you.

Like the midnight sun,
You light my night,
The sight of your face,
Makes my heart take flight.

When we embrace,
Time seems to stop.
I want to hold you forever,
I don’t want to swap.

With you I don’t want to sever,
Anything that could be.
Spending time with you is worthwhile,
It fills my being with glee.

This was written for my g/f, who fits every aspect of this poem. For lack of a better title, I just called it I Love You. If anyone has a better idea for a title or comments plz tell me.

&copy Joshua Bryant Cole

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  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    great poem!! 5/5
    why dont you call it "The Way You.."
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    cute poem!! keep it up!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by WhiSperNcUrsIVe

    i know exaclty what you mean...i love my boyfriend so much but he is moving to florida! and i am from michigan...we are staying together! great poem!
    for a title....ummm...everything you are! lol! i dont know! theres my idea though! lol
    ~*~brandy~*~
    please comment and read mine!

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    i think the title fits the poem perfectly. great job!

  • 20 years ago

    by Ashleigh

    That poem is great!!

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