This will be the last poem of this year. Please Vote and Comment on it.

Wow...this was an amazing tale! I loved it...I mean the flow is natural and the descriptions you used are superb! It's a shame you won't be posting more till next year!

Great job, David. Awww you last one for this year?? Thats sad. Well, I can't wait until next year.

Ashley

Terrific job on this poem!!! I loved it a lot! You're such a talented writer!!! Last one this year?? awwww!! :'( Well, I can't wait until your next poem!!!

Amy

This was was great, i really enjoyed it! your a great poet! take care, kayleigh xx

damn that was really good i love how is was writen lots of good words that helped me invision this story

well written poem! nice to see someone with the power to keep going. with all this said i must agree with everyone else whos commented on this, i will look out for your next one!

Wow, wonderful poem! =) Take care and keep writing!

Well I must say that was well thought out and very good I was moved to write this comment that was a great read and hope you start writing soon take care and be well

wow...this is fantastic. i love how you tied in the end, its sort of a metaphor for why this world of ours has been so corupt by human hands. This is a great poem , def excellent.

Your poem was very well written that you should allways go back and ediot what has been written. Thats what someone once told me.

Very, very well done David. It flows beautifully and it's very well written. Good work!
T.L.

I really liked the story in this one! 5! Check out mine if you find time.~Kandy

HEY! That's awesome! Wow! I love stories like that and you put it in poetic form! Amazing!

Wonderful storyline - loved it!!
You really made me wanna read on ^^
Good work!
5/5