wow this is absolutely amazing!

You have a never-ending imagination! This was unlike anything I've ever read! That last stanza was superb!!! You are an amazing poet!! Great job!

Wow!! I love this poem!! I could see it all in my head! Terrific job!!!!

Amy

This poem deserves much more than a five, it was really great i loved it very much, awesome work!
~Pb~

your poem was really good, it is something that i really like to read and it kept me wanting to read it more and more even though i had to go to the bathroom. I really liked and found myself not being able to be pulled away from it.

There are just a few things that i don't get.

Now its time to go
Ive overstayed too long
This is not my home now
Here I don't belong

In the shadows I watch
As they desperately try
To put out the flames
As my family within dies.

you said it was not your family, but it states there it is your family...unless it is a metaphore and i am not picking it up. But really i liked this poem. really awesome, keep it up, i enjoy reading your poems.

Thanks for your compliments Dark Savior. What i was getting at with those two stanzas was its no longer my home beacuse its about to be destroyed and i dont belong there anymore. I never said it wasnt my family. lol sorry, i suck at explaining things. But anyways thank u for your input, it means a lot to me.

ah! that was freakin awesome!!!! imma pyro..whoop whoop....