Love At Distance

by Ş∂ņďħy∂   Oct 4, 2004


When the tender breeze mixed with your breath kiss me,
I can feel the enigmatic spells that you cast on my soul.
Your enchanting love has always held me strong,
I crave for a true touch; unlike the one�s you let me dream.

While you send trillions of stars to make my nights bright
I keep starring at the moon that fades and recurs in our life
Even when you promised to take me for a ride on the sun
I know that you have to cross the sea to hold my hands

I am conscious about the distance that keeps us apart
However, Unconsciously my mind keeps following you
Every morning I wake up relishing some sweet memories
That you might have presented me in the shades of night

May be the dreams we weaved may stay as dreams forever
Since 'they' don�t believe in love, I may never meet you again
But I will save my virgin soul until you are allowed to own it
I will love you and only you, even after the end of time.

The sea can�t get vaporized for the two beaches to meet
If the God let Moses cross the Red Sea, then why can�t we?
Impossible it may appear but our dreams will turn true
The light of our love will remove shades from every eye!

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  • 20 years ago

    by Michelle

    this is a gorgeous poem!!! I loved it..but thats not saying much, love all of your work...I know about love at a distance as well, you know that!!! best wishes, God bless..Michelle

  • 20 years ago

    by Mike G

    Simply Beautiful! I loved this one. All of yours are really great. Keep it up!

  • 20 years ago

    by FireCracker

    loved it .. nice choice of words .. Undiscribable .. and very unique .. ! gave ya a 5 ! .. lol .. keep it up and check out my poems if you get a chance , THNX .. !

  • 20 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    wow...i didn't know weather to be impressed or to cry *yes men cry* I was amazed at the poem. I understand what you are going through and i totally feel you on this poem. I am amazed at the metaphores you used...the similies, the analogies *not many of them but still i liked the ones you used*. That poem just completely blew me away.

    Keep up the good work, someday you'll meet. " It is not the brains that matter most, but that which guides them---the character, the heart, generous qualities, progressive ideas." - Dostoyevsky.

    you have patiences, an amazing quality to have.

  • 20 years ago

    by sweetne$$

    i rate this poem... it was really sweet and written wit alot of emotions.. u used ur words to draw out a picture it was so real u did gud keep writin.

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