by Allen
Beautiful poem Tincy, poems are at its best when it comes from within, and this is just what this poem is :) nothing is better than a poem from the heart... thank you for sharing it with us, I hope you will be with the one you love soon :) Take care. |
by ChildofGod87
*Trincy* |
Very nice poem...U have written down ur feelings so well..take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>> |
by Gary
My wishes with u. Wonderful way of expressing ur feelings. But its more meaningfull if u do it face to face. |
Absolutely beautiful. I hope someday your dreams come true. |
Very nice!!! |
by Seth Rowley
Great poem, you are a great writer, and i like how you how you rhyme about your true feelings |
by sweetne$$
i rate this poem... it was really sweet and written wit alot of emotions.. u used ur words to draw out a picture it was so real u did gud keep writin. |
by Dark Savior
wow...i didn't know weather to be impressed or to cry *yes men cry* I was amazed at the poem. I understand what you are going through and i totally feel you on this poem. I am amazed at the metaphores you used...the similies, the analogies *not many of them but still i liked the ones you used*. That poem just completely blew me away. |
by FireCracker
loved it .. nice choice of words .. Undiscribable .. and very unique .. ! gave ya a 5 ! .. lol .. keep it up and check out my poems if you get a chance , THNX .. ! |
by Mike G
Simply Beautiful! I loved this one. All of yours are really great. Keep it up! |
by Michelle
this is a gorgeous poem!!! I loved it..but thats not saying much, love all of your work...I know about love at a distance as well, you know that!!! best wishes, God bless..Michelle |