Comments : My Cry For Help

  • 20 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey I can definetly relate to this
    Email me: kbsc300@hotmail.com
    Or AIM: Rmmbr2brth
    in case you need someone to talk to.
    Keep your chin up,
    Amanda

  • 20 years ago

    by Broken

    wow............great job!

  • 20 years ago

    by SheiLa

    i like this one too.. ;p

  • 20 years ago

    by Bud

    I can really relate to what you are saying. All i can say is that i you should never try and go through it by yourself xxxx take care xxxx

  • 20 years ago

    by don mohr

    you went from butcher knife to steak
    knife? Chilling and compelling! 5!

  • 20 years ago

    by Marta

    wow, that was really good poem, i guess i can relate too, maybe i can help, talk to me any time you want :) i like how you described the feeling and emotions in this poem, really good job, keep it up! oh and thanks for your comment! Means alot :)

  • 20 years ago

    by joe

    i pray its not based on true events.....it really is hard to put the knife down really hard when you see your scars from past times everyday.. just kno you have someone here if you need to talk i wont judge, only help
    you write so well and i feel through your poems your a great person and for that i care about you please talk to someone about these issues ...
    AIM: ziggycatofwar
    email- ziggythefuzzball@nc.rr.com
    please please let the blade go i kno its hard but so many ppl get hurt from it

    bye bud, hold your head high cuz you have someone who has never met you praying and caring for you =)

  • 20 years ago

    by Steve

    good poem

  • 20 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    You do have a nack for poetry!

  • 20 years ago

    by Miri

    heya,
    well when i read this i was first of all amazed, n then it reminded me of myself...well if u want someone to talk to about this, then i m here for ya, coz im going through the same thing since 2 years now, i d love to help ya though... so email me if u want to... navina05@hotmail.com
    hope ur doing alright sweety, just hang on...
    take care
    bis.

  • 20 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    Very nice!! Thats a very emo poem, thats kewl. Nice work!!

  • 20 years ago

    by fear no pain

    good job, love the new stuff, and i can completely relate...i don't know if thats a good thing or not, but its the truth

  • 20 years ago

    by fear no pain

    good job, love the new stuff, and i can completely relate...i don't know if thats a good thing or not, but its the truth

  • 20 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    i love this poem because i relate to it 100%

  • 20 years ago

    by chris johnson

    omg i hope this stuff didnt happen to you, cuz im starting the tear up and the last time i did that was when my parents divorced

  • 20 years ago

    by jennifer

    Your poems are absolutly amazing, you will go very far in life, thank-you for commenting on mine as well

  • 19 years ago

    by HeAvENLy UniQue

    I can relate to this completely, because this whole poem is a walk through of one of my flashbacks from last year... :( it's gonna be okay::> we'll thats what people say when I tell them I'm not okay. They don't bother to dig deep in me, they just say," it's gonna be okay". I don't know you, and I don't know how you take comments.. but if anything, you can leave me a message, email or something.. because I go through this, and it wouldn't hurt to talk about it, it helps. and I hate to hear that things are going to be okay, when you never know.

    CyN