i like it lots |
by TrUtH hUrTs
hmmm...icy clutches of salty freedom...i LURRVED tht...kudos 2 u my friend!! |
by Gracie Jo
Wow, excellent poem! =) Take care and keep writing! |
by Joy
Wow...this is really emotional stuff! I absolutely LOVE it! Great job, I love this one...Acrostic poems are so underated sometimes...Ttyl... |
Excellent poem...keep writing...take care...FIVE.. |
by SCARECROW
Beautiful... You actually make acrostic sound good. Also, thanks for commenting on Frost, and I have just finished it, though I changed the name to Rose. Anywayz, keep writing! |
I really hate this poem 'coz i wrte it only coz i had to... |
by Kris Lynn
I love your acoustic poems. They are so awesome...and you write them well. Keep them coming, |
by Nefarius
you wrote a poem that you don't like yourself ? that's strange, why then you hav it written down? |
Aaaahh finally someone asked me this...u might find this weird but i really wanted to see how good a poem i cud write mechanically...that is without feeling wat u rite...i wrote this conciously. As in normally my poems are written by me when i am in a particular mood similar to being drunk. Hope u knoe wat i mean |
by Lexi Lou
awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch! |
by Nefarius
^ i also have poems i worked hard on and spent many time, cause to the structure i want to have it, but i do not like them less, quite the contrary i like them because i know what hard work it was to get the right words in right order, see what i mean? |
Thanx mate...actually y i see wat u mean |