Wow....i am gonna analyze it on friday....after skul in the b\us

Good to see another indian on this site..this poem was very good.Had a great time reading this one of ur's...take care and hope to read more of ur poems...FIVE>>>

wow i really good piece of writing u have a lot of talent!

abby xxxx

wooow! beautiful write, really descriptive and an amazing ending, good job you're an awesome writer! Oh, and thanks for the comment too :)

Thats a good poem I gave it a 5!!!!!!!

I think this poem's great, I love the usage of "big words" lol...Great job, keep up the excellent work! I'd like to see more like this...

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This is so passe mon ami, i mean you have some skill with words, but it's all been done before aye?....i'm not trying to shoot you down....but it's boring...there's nothing new about it.

Nice poetic flow and no truer words have ever been spoken 5

An excellent poem. Each stanza flowed so pefectly into the next... awesome! Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

I liked the word choice, particularly aegis, I had to look that one up. This poem was good because it personified truth, and I thought that was a good way to handle having to explain truth.

I like how you opened the door ever so slightly and then casually widen it just a pek and then alittle more very inviting the wording was very well done too good job

WOW. great poem (had to look up a few words though! lol) Very well writtern and i like your choice of words and the topic. great work, keep it up. tc. xmollyxx

Just 1 word....EXELENT! Love it.
Ben

Good poem. I dont normally read dark poems. But this one was good. Keep it up, and i'll keep checking back.
~*~Christina~*~

You are very talented. Your poems flow very well and are very deep.

You have such a huge descriptive vocabulary, and it has enhanced this poem dramatically. It wouldn't have had the same affect without the words you chose to use. Excellent my dear. :-)

beautiful...thats all i can say

Amazing poem i really liked and I'm speechless!

Wow...awesome poem Great job expressing feelings Keep it up chica Much Love JJ

wow.... that was FANTASTIC!!! O_O simplybeautiful. I really liked it :]

-Cheerfully Cynical