I really liked this poem. I liked how you changed the rhyme of it, it varied the flow, and it didn't make it seem as safe. Great job!

Sometimes truth is really sad and you have done a great thing to prove it.=(
It was a very nice poem and I really love it...

Again, very descriptive and meaningful. I liked this poem a lot. A lot of emotion behind it. Keep it up!

luv it. its really good.

A lot of your poems have the same type of idea, but thats okay cuz they are so well written. This one was beautiful too, what can i say, you have so much talent!
SatuzKa
p.s now i added you to my favorites.

wow deep and powerful story loved it!!!!!! xxxxxx

Very interesting and uniquely written. Keep up the good work!
-Kate

You are such a great writer what are you doing on this silly site...lol...Im sure there is nothing I can say that willl help you...Great work Hun...Xox Sherrie

your an amazing writer....
Dont change....
Xox Sherrie

yet another great poem

omGG....dat was so great well done Mwazii XOxox Stephy :)

Simply incredible, one of the best i've seen.

Ummm... not your best work

i love the way you use big word lol. outta all the poems ive read theres not a lot like this. youve got talent.

Wow. u have alot of complexed words in this.. i love it

You have such a good word choice. you seem to just know the perfect word each time ^^
it was awsome