I like how your poem can relate to a number of people, instead of it just being aimed at a typical boyfriend/girlfriend relationship. Nice idea, sounds like you knew what you were writing about though, so I'm sorry if this is based on a true story. Nice job.

Thank you very much. It was based on a true story.

yay croutons !!!! (sry im being just so random, cuz i KNO u would NEVER do that................right ?) lol great poem just as usuaaaaal

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