Some mistakes in life can be corrected but mistake in love is hard to forget or forgive...Thanx for ur comment on my poem...It really meant a lot to me...Take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>>

okay, i didn't understand the rhyming scheme OR the excesive commas, but you usually have a few okay lines that save your ass. "4"

i tend not to use rhymin schemes, just good old freestyle! n i tried to cut down in commas

kinda strange, but still a classic.