Well written, I enjoyed it :)
~Tara

thanx you :)

this isnt borrowed i made it up....... it has been on the site for a while so maybe uve seen it here and it just let u vote again........ it does do that if u havent vote on it in a while

great poem different but caught my attention very well done
Dee

Wow...that amazes me...really dark lol...but the structure is not following...but who cares...mine is like that too...haha...maybe we should try to fix it sometime.

Great work
i love vampires, but despite my slight obsession with them i have yet to write anything concerning vampires, i loved the poem .