wow, that really did rock! errrrrm trying to think of a title for u...

where my body lays or,
I think I died

DARK BUT ENCHANTING 5

hey that was any awsome poem... you have a great way with words...
awsome poems nice work
sarah

Bold effort....your descriptions are most impressive...and you weave them with a solid level of skill so that the standard structiure in which they are presented never becomes boring...

You are hereby added to my favs....have a party...it's a rare thing.

Wow....awesome poem....the descriptions were excellent...keep writing my fellow india....take care...FIVE>>>

Hey good repitition, it definitely added to the overall structural coherence of the poem, and improved the rhythm of the poem as well.

where did I go wrong is too much of a cliche...how abt unknown or forgotten or even Marioneete i know it isnt related but seems cool anyway

Hey u call her onion too...am so happy

excellent poem. i like how each stanza ended the same way. you're very talented, i love the flow of the poem and the descriptions. xmollyxx

awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

good job, i really liked it, keep up the good work

this is freakin awsum..your an awsum writer...keep up the awsum work......~sherrie~

I have read some of your poems. They are good. I will try to find some time to read your poems regularly. I like the images you create.
I like your choice of vocabulary. It doesn’t look forced but elegant. With no question, this poem deserves a 5.

nicely written!! great poem!!

Another exellent poem u have great talent!

Very beautiful repetition and the whole idea of the poem was fantastic....and i love the way the poem is both sad and beautiful....wow, what can i say? This is definitly one of my favorite poems on this site. Keep writing, i'll add u to my favs if you aren't already.
Satuxxa