by Dark Savior Oct 7, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
The man lay battered and bruised |
by jenpiglet17
I really like this one-it reminds me of everyone i know that's overseas... the great thing, as sad as it is, it's so true, and could be happening any day. but really good poem. i like :) 5/5 |
by Jenn
hello again,i like this poem alotyou make something that my not be a true storey but yet you make it seem so really i could picture it all very dramatic i love it 5/5 |
by Jacklyn
LOVE it. great poem!! PLP |
by Allissa
i liked it....it kinda seems like jesus(not that ima christain or anything) but i liked man u should do more like that but darker i love it and i love it....srry |
by ReenIe
great i loved it. the story lione was brilliant. as for the comment u left me about the structure of my poems. do u have any advice because i've been trying to improve thew structure but i can't......... it would be realli appreciated for the advice. thanx.. oh yeah i like your work, i have been reading it , and its pretty good , i wish i could be that good, maybe one day with practice |