by Dani Ward Oct 7, 2004
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
You are my good friend, |
i loved it i went thru that too an i know how it feels. he wants to be my frend but im in love with hi...oh well i just have to wait |
by Lipton
This is awesome, bro. I feel the exact same way, about... umm... backround... uh music... yeah... anyway, keep writing! You have a lot of talent! |
by iwish0207
hey u have a great talent! i seemed to have lost mine. i just cant seem to write ne more. idk y. but keep writing cuz ur poems r great! ~michelle~ |
by Robert
very well done it told a story and held true to what you were talking about very good the rytnm was abit off but still a graeat read keep up the good work if you get a chance look at the Never-Ending Gift, I think you would like it keep it up and take care |
by Dani Ward
thanx for the wonderful comments, i'll be checking out your poems. |