WOW I have never had those feelings but reading that poem made me walk a mile in your shoes - very well written and even better put together - great descrptions and emotions so full of love and confusion - well done on a great piece!

Luv Eirisa

that was such an amazing poem i know exactly how you feel i am going through the same thing right now! it was really great...please check some of my poems out if you get the chance

An excellent poem. The emotion flowing through it was so great. Keep it up and take care!

God bless,
~Grace

thanx for the wonderful comments, i'll be checking out your poems.

very well done it told a story and held true to what you were talking about very good the rytnm was abit off but still a graeat read keep up the good work if you get a chance look at the Never-Ending Gift, I think you would like it keep it up and take care

hey u have a great talent! i seemed to have lost mine. i just cant seem to write ne more. idk y. but keep writing cuz ur poems r great! ~michelle~

This is awesome, bro. I feel the exact same way, about... umm... backround... uh music... yeah... anyway, keep writing! You have a lot of talent!

i loved it i went thru that too an i know how it feels. he wants to be my frend but im in love with hi...oh well i just have to wait