Omg...awesome poem megan...should totally be number one!! I loved it..so well-written and creative..and very imaginative...beautiful work hunnie <3 xxx |
by Cara
This poem was very good. I love the comparison to teh carnival cuz' like life is like a carousel! You're an amazing poet! |
Aww thank you! I wasn`t really sure which catagorie to put it in, so I may change it later. Love you lots! Stay strong, chin up. |
Thanks, Cara. I actually checked your work out too, which you most likely already know. Great work. Keep it up. ;) |
Thank you! I was trying to do something a little different. I actually wrote this one about 2 weeks ago but never had the time to submit it. I also have another one, but for now I don`t have any time alone to write. Once again, thank you! |
by vanessarrr
very interesting title. i really like the concept. it's really unique, i never would've thought of that. excellent poem. keep writing. take care:) |
Vlad: Thank you, my birthday is today actually, but I very appreciate that. I`ll try and keep writing, but I`m moving into my apartments in a couple days. Anywho, thank you for the comment, take care! |
by pinkalias
i liked this poem. i liked how you compared life to a nightmarish carnival and how we can never get off of the ride...creative comparison. i also liked how you naraated the poem and wrote it as if you were speaking to your "inner self" very creative. good job, |
Emily Alisha: Wow, thanks a million. That really means a lot. I am at the library now and will be coming back every so often to submit some new work, but it`s hard with me moving. Stay strong, I`ll take a look at your poems every once in awhile. Thank you again. |
Pinkalias: Thank you, knowing my work is appreciated really helps things. |
by Andrea
wow! amazing poem! i simply love it! |