oh soooo sad.... I love the almost limerickal (is that a word?) quality of this... it's almost... I dunno,...cute...which just adds a bit of irony to the sadness of it.

Great work!!!

Great poem Holly, I almost could sing it, the words are like the chorus of a song. Please keep up the good work. Love, Timothy r

Awesome poem holly...i understood it (i read your post in "discussion") i think it's really good..<3
-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

i like it. i read in a note that you've never written anything in that format before, but its good for a first one. i like it.

Geat poem. I really liked the style you wrote this in it. Keep it up

awesome. short, but so good. i love the title and the phrases you use "shattered moonbeams" and my fav line "Destiny cut cut by the blade of my knife" wow. i loved the irony and beautiful stances you used, gr8 job.

hey that was a really good poem!!

that was to short for my liking, but it was still amazing! you seem very talented and experienced in poetry! please keep writing! and keep in touch
lexi lou

I love the form, its touching. Very nice work!

You are the overlord of fluency! your flow is excellant and the imagery is class

I really like this one, especially the structure of the poem. Great talent. :-p

This is a very beautiful piece! I love it...it truly shines. Thank you for the most touching comments ever. They are so very sweet, and they make me feel better even by just a little. You must remember all the tough times you had when you were a teen.

i know i've already commented but I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM! i love it so much. the structure, the language, the flow! GIVE ME MORE!!!!!

I like it

very unique style. Very cool. I have been on here for quite awhile now, and somehow missed you! I'll have to check more of your work!!

ooo so beautiful!
loved it!
the imagery was fantasic, it really made you feel everything
wonderful work, keep it up!

~*LorienElf*~

wow...i rly lyked that poem! I loved how u worded everything...it reminded me of myself...keep writing! U have great talent! Stay strong...I always try 2! If ya need ne1...i'm here 2 tlk...Much love, Amy

Excellent poem 5!

that's a beautiful piece good work

good job Holly, nice style, and great insight, perfectly blended into the present. keep up the great works. Harry