GoodBye

by Danielle   Oct 7, 2004


Have you ever had to say good-bye?
To the one person that understood you?
Did you ever want to break down n’ cry
Because they up n’ left you
Have you ever had this open hole?
The piece missing inside
Did you try n’ find the reason
To all the pain and why?

I’m staring at these lonely walls
Trying to find some peace
All I see is darkness
The pain has all but ceased

I don’t know where you are
Or what your doing now
I don’t know what your thinking
Like I used to know some how
I pick up this flower
And it resembles you and I
Each obstacle is a petal
Each time I’ve saw you cry
Each represents a time
For all the love we shared
The pain we’ve felt together
All the times when no one cared
The petals fall all around me
As I pick them one by one
You n’ I are falling apart
The tears run more often
The petals all around me
Represent you n’ I
The day we lost each other
Was the day we said good-bye

I'm losin it :-\

What if you knew the next time you saw me would be the last? Would you apologize for the mean things you've said? Would you laugh at all the good times we've had? Would you cry If I left? A true friend would do this, right? Wrong, a true friend would never let me go *Dedicated To You*

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  • 20 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW!!! THis poem was soo deep and amazing and heart felt..i really really liked it..and I could definately relate to it!! Great work Danielle!!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by jescelle

    i hope your friendship is gonna be ok....

  • Hey Danielle,
    I really, really liked this poem.. Just something about it sorta hit me if you get what i mean.. I'm pretty fukd up right now too because of some of the people i have lost, through both arguments and also death.. I guess you coul dsay we're both losing it.. Must be something about the Daniellez... Well, look after yourself gurl, keep your had up, take care..
    Loving you Alwayz,
    Dani, xx

  • 20 years ago

    by Samz

    very very nice poem ....i really like it,keep on doing that great job
    Could you plz vote/comment my last poem'on my mind' too plz
    Take care.....
    SamZzZz

  • 20 years ago

    by Randy Lee

    always a pleasure to read your work. keep em comin, and if you want a smile, try my latest. Keep em comin.

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