Give Back and Take Away !

by FireCracker   Oct 8, 2004


Give Back and Take Away...

Give me back my heart
Take away this pain
So I can try and remove this constant feeling
That is driving me insane...

Give back that taste of my kiss
Take away those memories of you
I know I will so badly miss

Take back all your stuff
I do not want anything
Please accept back
My old seldom promise ring

Because what you promised
Is absolutely no more
So take back all these feelings
I can not bare the pain anymore

I can not fight this feeling
Of such pain and misery
So please give back all
Those feelings you once felt for me

Please take away
Our funny inside jokes and times we would laugh together
Please give me back what you would call “My good smelling pretty pink sweater”

Take away the thought of us
And erase it from my mind
Please give back my heart
So a much better girl you will find

It is time for us as a rose
To UN-twine
It is for me to face the fact
You are no longer mine

Give back my heart and my soul
Take your existence from me
Give back my sight
So I can finally again see

So take away
This pain of mine
So I can finally be my own person
It is time for me as a single rose to Un-twine

Give back what you took
Take my heartache away
Please take back those words you
Would once always say

Take back “ I love you so much”
Take back those days of holding me Because I no longer can have your touch

So take and give everything back of mine It is time for me to let you go and Finally move on and un-twine

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  • 20 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    wow this poem really means a deal to me! i love it! i fwlt the emotions through it and it made me shutter with memories! youve got something! just keep on rolling with it!
    Lexi Lou

  • 20 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Awwww...this was just perfect for the guy to pay attention to how you feel..Straight out and Flat...hehe...Awesome Job:) 5/5... I wrote new one's if you have anytimes check on them..thanx;)..Again Awesome poem... ~Take Care Maybeth~ ^Keep in Touch^ :D

    **With the Love Sedusha**

  • 20 years ago

    by Bud

    Great poem!!! i hope everything goes well for you - and thanx for commenting on my poem xxxx take care of yaself huni xxxx

  • 20 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Very emotional poem..Hope ur feeling better now...Take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>