To Sad to Cry

by Idiosyncratic   Oct 8, 2004


To sad to cry
So she sits and waits
She sighs a very silent sigh
And basks in the pain
That she creates
But there is nothing she can gain
So she stays
And simply waits
Sorting through her thoughts
A neverending maze;
Her feelings that are overwrought
She awaits whatever
May be her fate
To sad to cry
So she sits and waits

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    I know exactly what you're writing about here, i think we've all been 'to sad to cry' before. good job with this, i like your choice of words, and it has a good rhythm, personally, i think the flow is a little jumpy though...
    but great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Well all i can say.... this is great

  • 19 years ago

    by Heidi

    The poem is gr8 ! Well done. Keep up the good work, and thankx 4 writing on my poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    i like this poem! and thank you for commenting on my first poem! and no the are not all great but you! aww geesh ya GFOT SOME TALENT!
    lexi lou

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    it sounds kind of weird, to sad to cry, but you dont understand that unless you go through it. good poem

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