Great yet sad poem.. I love your wording.. When i read i'm like that's perfect there is nothing she could of done different.. Again my favorite line was: But sometimes the tears can’t help but fall... That is so true... And i'm sorry for your friends loose.. I don't know how it feels... And again sorry.... Take care
Angel

I feel sorry for ur friend...i pray for her family....nice write...ur very talented and i have put u in my favourite list...take care...FIVE<<<
i would like to know how u feel abt my new poem "My Poems For You!!!"

Eirisa you are absolutley the best!!!!!! God I'm in tears..That is SO sad! I was crying in the 6th line already!! I havent lost my dad either but wrods cant begin to express what i want to say to those who have, abd you just said exactly what I've been wanting to say to those who have lost a father, or any one at that matter! Whoever this is too should feel so honored and special to have just the wonderfulest friend like you write this for them... That was so touching..The tears are still comeing..Makes me realise i should never take advantage of my dad, or any family member..I'm not even her and I love you so much for writeing this!! Great Job girl!! Gosh!! Still in shock!! I'll give you a five and leave it at that! Nice write!

touching girl... you gota keep writing its so good

Very Nice Poem.. A lot of emotion. I enjoyed it.

hiya girl =) such a very talented girl =) liked ur work right here =) but i feel bad for ur friend hope she doin ok... and thanx for the comments =) much love =) take care

Awesome poem. I'm sorry for your friend..Has she read this poem?

Hi the broken one
Thanks yes she has read the poem I waited till about a week after the funeral and i gave it too her - she appreciated it very much and has placed it in her dads special box - thanks for your kind words

Aww I loved this poem...so much raw emotion and I even had a tear in my eye...your writing style is so very unique and I love all your poems...Keep up the good work...Luv Bethy xx

Ohhh.. this is sad, and verrrry nice. Sounds to me that your a wonderful friend to type up something so heart-warming... hope evrything gets better with your friend. and take care. ;)

CyN*

you go girl .. how awesome of a poem, like usually i always expect nothing but the best .. so of course i gave u a five ... ! !

you have a real talent!I love your poems check out mine sometime!

that is a very sweet thing for you to do for your friend, i hope that helped her, and im sorry for her loss
take care
-Allen

What a beautiful poem. Your poems never disappoint. You are added to my faves.

oh my god that was soo beautiful..I'm sorry about ur friends loss of her Dad..sometimes you can't be strong and thats okay..I'm sure she'll love it with tears of joy!!

Unloved ♥

im crying!!! your very very talented..its brilliant and i know if i was in your freinds position this would make me smile x well done

So sad about your friend losing her dad . You sound like a very compassionate and true friend .True friends are hard to find I wish I had one like you .Keep up the great work