All im left with

by Megha   Oct 8, 2004


Left alone like an insignificant creature,
tears defining my each and every feature.

you make me feel tormented and torn,
passing unheard is my painful groan.

you ripped my heart into a million bits,
my hearts given up,its decided to quit.

I'm tired of giving you"one more chance"
you've lost me,you've lost your stance.

this is one terrible,badly ended story,
and at the end of it,all I'm left with is your "sorry".

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  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    Great poem, it rhymes and flows so well, I can feel you emotion through your words :) Thank you for sharing your work with us :D take care.

  • 20 years ago

    by Megha

    yes i remember u bhaskarrya ...my memory's not so bad!
    thanks 4 posting every1...it means a lot.

  • 20 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    meGHA, this is yet another creation in the crevices of pains. The way life create us into beautiful works, woven to stand out is amazing. Dont lose hope. I enjoy this too!!!

  • This poem is incredible. The sentiments were unrevealed in an intense way. I am so sorry for what is happening with you.. BUt stay strong. Atleast you came to know the truth..

    You are a brave girl... I can sense the anger in your poems.. So please cool down.. I hope i could help you in anyways... Take care... Love, Trincy.

  • 20 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    5/5...:D