hey I liked this poem. Keep it up and take care! also, thank you for the comment. and the reason I kept repeating life and death in my poem is because the entire poem was focused around it. thanks again for your opinion! =)

~Grace

"yell into my thoughts, slap my worthless face
toss me down burn my legs
kill me, i can be replaced"

^ Wow. I can so totally relate. I absolutely loved this poem. Excellent job... Breathtaking.

that is not dumb! it was written with thought and emotion. thank you for the note about my diary, it means a lot. it makes me feel awesome when people like my poems! you're a good writer too, better than me! ^_^ have fun!