wow...deep poem. i really love

oops. i didnt get to finish! lol. as i was saying...

i really love this poem b/c you not only put your emotions into this poem but you can feel it, you know what i mean? its a wonderful poem!

very compelling poem. i loved it!! i know someone like each person described in this poem. keep it up!!

love alwayz,
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Wow, wonderful job. I really loved this poem, in fact, I think it`s one of my favorites. It shows so much emotion and depth. Help your friends as best you can, they will help you back. Keep your chin up, never look down.

Take care of yourself xx

... Amazing

Excellent poem.. speechless

Wow, that was so incredibly well written. it's tragic stories don't get me wrong but the way you wrote it was absolutly amazing.

*spechless*

whoa..you got a lot of talent girl..i know what it's like to be fcuked up, and have fcuked up friends..but different to your situation..

keep up the good work

-the_broken_one-

W-O-W I love this so much!! I can relate to a few of the stories you told...specially the bulimic one....Everything about this poem was perfect...Keep it up, please!!!

Penny xxxxxx

that was an amazing, sad, poem. I am so sorry what your friends went through! I am truly. I cant even imagine. But i could picture sumthing in my mind from yuor poem, great job again!

WOW! that was really powerful! im speechless....spectacular work!!!!!

Hey i really loved your poem...a couple of those things seem to happen to me but i just can't write about it and i hope your not living through to much hell at home...i'm prayin for u...love you Heather....even though i don't know you...but god does...:-D

hey hunni, if this is how you are living your life then i am sorry. what you and your friends need to see is no one can help you exept from yourself. hold eachothers hands and it will keep you safe but it will not heal your wounds. sh!t happens in live and it aint that easy to deal with. if you want any help or advice email me coz i will be there for you. and by the way you may not see it but you have everything to live for. show the bastards in this world what youre made of girl!!!

whoa hey and I though I had it rough I take it back that just beats me to the top. But, hey I understand you perfectly maybe other don't cuse there fools. They know nothing about whats going on around them. Well even though I don't know you I wish you the best in your life cause everyone desreves a little better into them but hey faith leads the way.

really good poem but next time try more to match the syllables in the lines. dont worry about the rhyming. otherthen taht brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!

i loved it!

that was an awesome poem. great writing.

whoa that was so good. love it!

There are no words to express how much i love this poem, i know how this is exactly,
just...wow
jo

Wow amazin i really relate to this i h8 my friend survive a car crash but all three of her mates died her lover died in her arms, her best mate died on impact and so did her other friend i really feel 4 her i luv er to bits she has her days and memories but she always will, but i think she has done one of the most respectable things she could do she got a tatoo with there names going across the rose. R.I.P Neil And El (elliott) Calley Keep Smilin Babe.