Comments : Living In The Shadows

  • 16 years ago

    by Quiet Storm

    Wow that really bought tears to my eyes. I can amost feel the pain, i've been through similar things.

  • 16 years ago

    by Farther From Here

    I can relate to your emotions of depression and a certain hate in this forsaken world. But we are different, never did I want to hurt myself or those around me. To be able to continue in this life, you've just got to open your eyes. Look around you and what you'll see will make you gasp.

    We were brought into this world for a reason not our own. If you think that your life will forever on continue on a spiral motion going down, then let that depression consume you-- maybe it already has. But maybe its just time to wake up from your little world of spider webs and darkness. Because you maybe blinded with what you could see with your eyes open... LIGHT.

    But seriously, you've got talent. You've got strong emotion! Great poem! Made my gloom disappear, as if your poem sucked it all out! Good luck in life and writing! 5/5!