very well done you did a really good job loved your style take care and if you get time take a look at my work look for Saddness Overwhelming or Sin well take care and talk to you later

Your just, without a doubt, a fantastic Poet.

I love how, a majority, of your poems have this beautiful monolgue, then they have this hanging--somewhat dreadful hurt at the end of them. Truly beautiful. Keep on Writing! Please! And update me when you have a new one out!!!!

God Bless ;)!

omg omg omg lol i love this poem soooooooooooooooo much its excellent! lol i can totally relate i think thats why i love it so much but whatever the reason i love this poem lol its brilliant! lol ur goin in my favourites lol! great work 5/5
bec xXx

Very good poem.wish I would have read it a long time ago.It just gave me some inspiration.well lataz

robert Flores

Me and my bestie dated 4 5 yrs wen we broke up it was bad we had been 2gether since we were 5! thats young but wateva. its something most ppl can relate 2, well in my opinon. plz read and comment sum of mine

Good poem I like it