Mirror

by Rachael/7MidniteTears   Oct 9, 2004


I look at the mirror
And what do i see
A girl who is crying
Right in front of me

I try to make her
Just stop her tears
But shes kept this going
Through all the years

She breaks the mirror
The glass shattered
I tried to ask
What was the matter

Tears droppin uncontrolably
Trying to make her stop
But all i could do is
Just watch her tears drop

She fell to the ground
And cut herself from the pieces
She watched the blood drop
And the drips just increases

I try to save her
But its too late
She died because
She was full with hate

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  • 19 years ago

    by N8

    your too good at this stuff you make everyone look bad good job
    I loved it
    your really deep

  • 19 years ago

    by Dieing

    Wow....not much to say but....wow

  • 19 years ago

    by spunk

    wow, you are an amazing writter, i feel yor pain that you describe in every poem you write, keep up the good work, you are a very tallented individual
    -spunk-

  • 20 years ago

    by Danielle

    it was written well, but I didn't like the end of it...

  • 20 years ago

    by Rachael

    the poem was great, i hope ur not in all that pain
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