Wow...that was an amazing one...it was so much full of pain...take care and keep smiling....FIVE>>>

Wow, this poem is so good, the pain thats there...its like i felt i was the girl...almost like i felt her pain.. it was great (5)

i really love this poem for the deep meaning, facing the truth is the first step to any healing we all must die in order to be reborn amazing inpiration wisdom beyond years 5.0

excellent. it was angsty and the story was well told. i enjoyed reading it because of the flawless rhyming. i hope you're ok, though... take care:)

5! I love it! ~you saw mine and dawn's pics and went to avatar.com huh~

Not bad at all...a little formulatic and cliche...but cool none the less....can you write without such classic forms?

the poem was great, i hope ur not in all that pain
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it was written well, but I didn't like the end of it...

wow, you are an amazing writter, i feel yor pain that you describe in every poem you write, keep up the good work, you are a very tallented individual
-spunk-

Wow....not much to say but....wow

your too good at this stuff you make everyone look bad good job
I loved it
your really deep