this is a great poem, i loved it. i loved how you used the lines and comparison, the symblosim was beautiful. i absolutly love how you wrote the stances, its a beautiful poem, keep writing

WOW O_O that is like all i can say (a good wow) you are such a talented writer!!!

The last line in this poem really made the read worth it. It was like a direct address to your reader xxxx alex xxx

I have to say your poem can become somewhat inspirational i loved this piece from the way it flowed to the meaning behind it all, wonderfully written-
raindrops 5/5

Waw, again you have special tallent ,nice choice of words i real enjoy reading, keep write 5/5