by Robert Oct 9, 2004
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Another door, another face, |
Done that job - felt those sore feet and had a tremendous amount of empathy with you in this piece xx |
by Lucy
this was wonderful...i love the word choice in this...great job |
by Carmen
that was good. i like that it was original, and how you can take place of someone else (unless you really are a salesman) well, great! 5/5 |
This poem was different yes, but it didn't really have anything catchy in it that holds a readers gaze, not bad though |
by Shelby G.
hmm... I suppose the idea of the poem is a little strait foreward... but at the same time it didn't make much sense to me at all... |