This is life as you see it? Hmmmnnn I wonder, I imagine. Good work. The ryhme was something else. Thanks for stopping by to comment on my poems.

hmm... I suppose the idea of the poem is a little strait foreward... but at the same time it didn't make much sense to me at all...

This poem was different yes, but it didn't really have anything catchy in it that holds a readers gaze, not bad though

that was good. i like that it was original, and how you can take place of someone else (unless you really are a salesman) well, great! 5/5

this was wonderful...i love the word choice in this...great job

Done that job - felt those sore feet and had a tremendous amount of empathy with you in this piece xx