SHOW ME AN ESCAPE

by `*`Silently_Hurting`*`   Oct 9, 2004


SHOW ME AN ESCAPE
Everything in my life seems so messed up,
Is it because of me that it is?
Or is it just meant to be?
Coz I'm not sure why i feel like this..

Am i a mistake to the world?
Lord, can this life get any worse?
Coz I'm starting feel like this life is not a gift.
But instead a curse.

At times i want to escape and leave,
I don't want to spend my time here,
I'm sick of living in all my doubt,
And all my fears.

Sometimes i feel so suffocated and weighed upon,
I'm not sure how to handle it all,
Its difficult to compromise how you feel
so for me I build a wall.

This life of mine leaves me confused
and I'm not sure just how much more i can take,
Lord i know you there,
wont you show me an escape?

**PLEASE COMMENT AND RATE, LOVE TO KNOW WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT THIS POEM.. I KNOW I HAVENT SUBMITTED A POEM IN A WHILE, AND IN THAT TIME THINGS IN MY LIFE WERE GOING SMOOTHLY BUT, ITS NOT ANYMORE..**

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  • 20 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    It feels that way when we try to control life. I enjoyed your expressions and your forthrightness. This is kool. Hope you do ot find my comment too personal?

  • 20 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW..this is a terrfic poem!! I totally can relate to it too!! I'm very sorry to hear that your life isn't going smoothly anymore, I wish you the very best!! Try and stay strong because your a person who is worth alot in this world!!
    best of luck.

  • 20 years ago

    by ~Bloodied&Broken

    Excellent poetry! Don't worry i know how you feel. the only ting in this world that keeps me alive is my friends. Please check out my poems and quotes too THANX! :)

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