Excellent poetry! Don't worry i know how you feel. the only ting in this world that keeps me alive is my friends. Please check out my poems and quotes too THANX! :)

WOW..this is a terrfic poem!! I totally can relate to it too!! I'm very sorry to hear that your life isn't going smoothly anymore, I wish you the very best!! Try and stay strong because your a person who is worth alot in this world!!
best of luck.

It feels that way when we try to control life. I enjoyed your expressions and your forthrightness. This is kool. Hope you do ot find my comment too personal?