by ~Bloodied&Broken Oct 9, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I say my goodbye |
THANX GUYS! :) |
by *Elizabeth*
OH wow!!!! this was an excellent poem!! It flowed very nicely!!!! it is perfect just the way it is!!! I really really liked this one alot!!!! keep it up!!! |
Hey awsome poem, I can relate to it.. Thanks for commenting on my poem! |
by Cedric
that was really good...though I would recemend not to ryme so much....ryming sometimes ruens the poem u are tring to write... |