see that's why i dont wanna go to the homecoming dance on the 16th. i was end up alone.

Kala! :'( This is so so sad. I dislike to read your work when its sad. I hate hearing your sad! This is ..just...wow your descriptive couldnt have been better. And it touched me deeply. You are a great writer. Continue Writing always. Love u loads, Jessica xxxxx

Kala you have NO right to say something like that b/c I offered to dance with you, you said no. You told Anna not to dance with me just because you were mad at me and you have NO right to say what you said in that poem because you had the opportunity to dance but refused.

Hey, this is a very good poem, no rhyme but flow so well :) This is the kind of poem I would love to write but.... can't.... well, maybe one day :D Keep up with good work :) Take care.

Whoa, that should be taboo, for best friends to even look at my x's
Nice poem. As always you know how to deliver emotions, and visuals. Thank you for sharing, this poem really got me thinking.
~David