Someone Else Now

by ChildofGod87   Oct 10, 2004


I see that you have someone now!
Well, you had your chance,
but you blow it!

I wish that you just could
see how you hurt me.
I wish you knew that
I'm stronger than you think.
I want to think that everything is "Okay"
but how can I think that
when really I feel so hurt & bad that
you put me a hole in my heart!!!

I really adore you,
but "You" I can't say, it hurt to
say that you left and your
not coming back in my life!!!!
I'm going to try to push you away
from my thoughts & heart!!!

® Copyright © Sedusha 2004

*This isn't dedicated to "Kev"*

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  • 20 years ago

    by Kevin

    This needs some serious work in terms of structure, flow and content...you could lose a whole heap of words...don't write poems like normal prose,...it should sound like a poem no matter how it's placed.

    I realise english may not be your first language...but yeah....this needs some thought put into it.

  • 20 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    There is a saying "No person is worth ur tears and the person worthy will not make u cry"...Hope that the person ur seeing keeps u happy always...Take care...FIVE>>>

  • 20 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    There is a saying "No person is worth ur tears and the person worthy will not make u cry"...Hope that the person ur seeing keeps u happy always...Take care...FIVE>>>

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