So touching. Very well writen. There is a slight error in the 12th stanza. If you would I would appreciate it if you read some of my poems. Thank you.
~*~Jessica~*~

woah thats really good...great job...its a 5!!! feel free to IM me at aim on Still Loven Love or e-mail me at Classylassie@myway.com...kk later
---you know how I do---
Amanda
aka
Oobie

Oh hey baby girl ...

This was beautiful hun what a precious love you guys much share - i am so happy for you babygirl you will have to email me all the details - im still waiting!!!!

Eirisa - GREAT WRITE MAYBETH xoox

Wow, can Imagine the passion and glow in your heart as you share these thoughts. I am impressed. Really touching ans beautiful.
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Pls consider editing 'I did die of suicide', 'to again told me tight ', 'what in ever ' do you mean "did not die..", to again hold me..", " in every .."

Wow, really great poem. Keep it up!

awww girl this is cute, it sounds like you got somebody special, nice work!