I like it. It's a unique take and it broke away from your usual format. Good job!
Aken Sol

excellent piece of work! i must add you to my fav. list to read more!

I liked it. I thought that the last line of the first stanza was a little awkward, but the later stanzas are all really good.

Great Poem. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

Should this poem go under a different topic instead of miscellaneous? It was hard for me to think of what it is so I put under that.

Oh and I really appreciate the comments, thanks.

Wow. Nice work. Very unique and indivual.