Give Me A Man

by My Obsεssion   Oct 10, 2004


Give me a man
That’s pure of heart
A sweet little candy
That’s none too tart

Give me a man
That’s sound of mind
An average guy
That’s truly one-of-a-kind

Give me a man
That’s gracious and smart
Not worried where to end
But instead where to start

Give me a man
That’ll love me for me
That’s independent
But none too free

Give me a man
That’ll push me to all I can be
That won’t believe all he hears
But rather what he manages to see

Give me a man
That’s an example of perfection
He doesn’t have to be flawless
But just has to pass my inspection

**Open to suggestions on anything you think could use some editing or whatever**

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  • 20 years ago

    by Jackie Bilson

    Yeah, i agree with andrea. It's cute and I wish I had someone like that too. :) I don't think there's anything you need to change. It's pretty perfect.

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    lovely poem and i think everyone would want a man like this!

  • 20 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    very sweet hope to read more soon! keep in touch!